Posts Tagged ‘writing goals’
Becoming a Better Critique Partner
Posted June 7, 2011
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I’m fortunate to have two critique partners who pour over my work with a commitment to make me a better–and published–novelist. The three of us have been on this journey for a couple of years now and I know how valuable it is to have writers I trust comment on my work.
I often think of Randy Pausch’s words in “The Last Lecture” when he refers to a football coach who cared enough to keep on him to make him better. After a particularly tough practice an assistant coach told Pausch why criticism is a good thing. “When you’re screwing up and nobody says anything to you anymore, that means they’ve given up on you.” My read-and-critique partners never give up on me. And I’ll never give up on them.
“When you’re screwing up and nobody says anything to you anymore, that means they’ve given up on you.”
When I spend time reading their pages, I want it to be of value to both of us. I’ve learned the more I critique, the better I get at it and the more my own writing improves. (Funny how practice always makes perfect, just like Mom said.)
There is a big difference between critiquing and providing a line-by-line edit. If I see glaring grammar, spelling or punctuation issues, I’ll comment, but GSP is not the focus of my critique.
I’m spending my energies determining if the story world works.
Is the tension in each scene enough to make me want to turn the page?
Does the pacing of the book feel right? Not too fast, not too slow?
Am I asking myself, what will happen next or are things dragging along?
Do I care about what’s happening to the characters? Am I invested in the outcome?
Are there enough visual images? Are there too many? (As far as I’m concerned that’s just as bad.) Do I want to skip sentences, paragraphs, entire pages?
What information you look for when you receive critiques from your critique partners? What information to you supply?
–Claire Yezbak Fadden
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I can come up with lots of reasons to not work on my fiction. There are deadlines for articles, baskets of laundry waiting, roasts that need defrosting. The hardest thing is to keep my butt in the chair, putting words on the page, delving into my characters and showing—not telling.
I realize this is part of being a writer. We’ve all stared at a blank computer screen, trying not to be distracted, or feeling depleted of ideas. “You can fix anything but a blank page,” popular writer Nora Roberts says.
She discards the idea that writers must wait for inspiration to come to them mystically, as if from a muse. “Inspiration is crap,” she said during an interview at a Romance Writers of America conference. She told writing hopefuls to not waste their time waiting for a muse to help them move their fingers across the keyboard. Frankly, she said the muse is “a fickle bitch. Don’t depend on her.”
Well, I’m not necessarily waiting for a muse to pour compelling prose through my fingertips, but I am looking for suggestions on how to keep writing, especially when it seems like the last thing I’m able to do.
How do you keep at it? What tricks can you share with your fellow writers to keep us writing when we feel like we’re “carving in granite with a toothpick,” as Roberts suggests.
–Claire Yezbak Fadden
Journey to Your Dream
Posted January 28, 2010
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Les Brown said it best when he said “it’s better to be prepared for an opportunity, than have an opportunity and not be prepared.” We all have the desire to accomplish a goal or see a dream manifest, but are we ready? If an opportunity that you’ve been hoping for presented itself, would you be ready?
The other day I was thinking about a writer friend of mine, who recently hooked up with an agent that she truly admires and is excited about working with. But one thing I know about this friend (D.J) is that this didn’t just happen. She lined her actions up with her dreams. Like many of us, her desire is to be a published author. But unlike some, she has researched the industry inside and out; collected information on everything from how to write a book – to what to do once your book is on the shelf. She has been apart of and has founded numerous writer’s groups, and has befriended several New York Times best selling authors. I can’t help but admire her. Even though all of this is very new, and her manuscript hasn’t sold YET, she’s ready. She won’t be floundering around trying to figure out what to do next because she’s been planning for this opportunity for years.
I once heard that when setting a goal, it’s important to do something everyday towards reaching that goal. If your goal is to be a New York Times best selling author, what are you doing to line yourself up with your goal? Anything? So I ask you again, if an opportunity presented itself, would you be ready?
Sharon C. Cooper
Year-end Writing Blues
Posted December 24, 2009
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I found this year’s writing goals when I cleaned out my office, a.k.a. the formal dining room, to get ready for holiday visitors. It’s not like I didn’t have the goals memorized. I even had measurable objectives listed to make sure I got from Point A to Point B to Point C, and so on.
I didn’t reach ANY of my goals the way I intended this year.
At first, I played the mental punching bag. If I were more ______________ (organized, efficient, and a myriad other disparaging choices), I would be farther along on developing my platform for my nonfiction book, Grade by Grade: Excellent Elementary Education Made Easy. Why haven’t I finished the entire revision for Taking Chances, my YA novel? I even have an agent who has agreed to read it when it’s completed.
“Why do you do this writing thing at all?” I yelled at the bathroom mirror.
Answer: I write because I can’t not write.
If I’m not punching keys at the computer, I’m jotting ideas, references, or some cool phrase I heard at the mall on a tablet or the back of a magazine. My characters go places and do things in my head all the time, and they wake me up at night.
Writing is part of me – one of my favorite parts.
I haven’t secured a deal with an agent yet, but I’ve gotten several articles published and started a newsletter. Grade by Grade News will gain more followers as I publish it consistently. After all, it was quite a feat to figure out how to write a newsletter and get it distributed. I’m giving a workshop at the end of January, so I’ll get the word out there, too. In the new year, I’ll send out queries to land contracts and get a few more articles published. On the fiction front, living in Maria’s world, experiencing my Latina heroine’s life as it grows into a breathing, believable three-dimensional reality, “hearing” the characters’ voices clearly and individually, getting rid of the junk and polishing the rest, has been incredibly rewarding.
Okay, so the process isn’t going as fast as I would like. Between family demands and juggling fiction and nonfiction projects, maybe my expectations were a bit unrealistic.
My big lesson for 2009 on the writing front: Pay attention to progress and reset objectives that don’t work. That way, the world doesn’t have to feel like some throbbing thing on the verge of explosion when I don’t meet the goals I set for myself.
As long as I’m PATIENT, CONSISTENT, and DILIGENT the rest will take care of itself.
The magic key to any writer’s career: KEEP WRITING!
So … Happy Writing in the new year!
Trish Wilkinson